So, I reconed that I should even the whole play out into 2 acts / 4 scenes a peice which leaves me one scene down. I wrote a new scene last night when everyone else was watching Lost and it's mostly between Christina and James (Dan appears at the end - pissed) and it fuses their private and public worlds. Christina and James have just gone to her father's funeral and Dan didn't show up - he was out getting drunk and being all sentimental about the whole affair. It highlights James's removal from society and from the siblings - and also how deep down he's quite a nice bloke.
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